4. For question #2, what did you do differently from the original post? Please outline, explain and justify what you changed & why. Essentially, what did you learn from this new topic and what did you change and why? (8 Marks)

What I did differently was rewriting the content to make it more clear, structured and personal based on what I learned in class. My original version had a lot of long sentences and repetition which made my content more lengthy. It made my content feel wordy and hard to follow so I decided to change that when I rewrote it. In the revised version, I simplified my wording and made the message personable but direct by shortening my sentences. 

I changed the structure a bit while utilizing the F-pattern to make it more shorter and scannable as my original version was a bit longer which I believe will make it easier for readers to read. I also changed the tone a bit to make it less generic like my original version and make it more personal and relatable. The changes I believe made the content more easier to scan and read and while connecting to readers. 

Overall,  I learned how to utilize plain English alongside the F-pattern to make my writings more clear and easy to read without sounding complex.